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Alex
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Very nice creamy bokeh, which lens is it? The hair is lacking a little bit of detail here I'd say, and her pose/face does not seem to be very comfortable for her in this one.
Nice DOF
but regarding the model the smile seems a little pensive you need to make her more comfortable 70% of this is establishing rapport with the model then shooting away the quarter profile is good and i see the cartchlight in the eyes for improvement i would tone down the orange skin just a tad and consider other locations for portraiture work one with lots of complimentary coours I dont think yellow/orange(skin) and a bright green background(park) is complimentary keep it up, practice makes near purrrfect
Thanks for the comments Oscar and Wendell.
Wendell - Yes, the skin looks a bit too orange when view in IE. When I view the image in PS CS2 and NC the colours look much better. I calibrated monitor to suit the printer at the shop where I normally print. Alex
hi alex
o.k to fix that calibration issue in photoshop select 'edit' and choose 'convert to profile' select 'srgb xxxxxx 2.1' then save for the web you probably have a profile on that image
ie may have a colour profile set I know on my mac at work safari has the apple inbuilt gamma 1.1 on it you can turn the option off you need to determine first what your global colour profiles are, the ones set by windows they need to be in sync with your photoshop coloursync workflow
Interestingly, the photo looks fine in IE on two other computers at my place. Not exactly as I see it in PS but close. I think it's to do with the fact that IE simply ignores any profile the image has assigned. Alex
Further to this.. when I do soft proof view in PS the colours are ok if I choose "Windows RGB" but when I go to "Monitor RGB" the colours are very different (what I see in IE on my monitor).
Alex
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