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The Rocks, Night Shoot.

Postby Shoot on Sat Jan 13, 2007 10:34 pm

A few pics from the night shoot in The Rocks.

C&C Welcome as always. Anything I could have done different?


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Postby garlino on Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:40 am

Love the second last shot. very nice.

Also like the second shot as well, how the buildings are black and you can see the nice colour of the sky. :)
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Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 14, 2007 4:43 pm

#3 is great Shoot. I would clone out the ligh patch on the right.
#5 seems a touch over exposed to me. Nice refections.
#6 It is a bummer about the chanel marker in the centre of shot.
I have the same hassels most of the time.
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Postby Oscar on Sun Jan 14, 2007 5:51 pm

Rob, that 4th shot could have been a cracker if you had managed to line up the light, the tower and the plane. Or maybe if the plane had been further to the right just above the lamp post.

On my monitor the first shot seems to be dominated by the dark silhouette of the building. As I cannot see any detail in the building it doesn't seem to add to the shot.. Just MHO though.

Second one also appears as though the SOH is off level - just like my shot :lol: It's probably the way they built it hey!

Keep 'em coming.

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Postby marcotrov on Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:29 pm

Rob #3 and #5 are both strong shots in this set. I'd be tempted to experiment with straightening the verticals (lens distortion) a little in PS to see how that looks :)
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Postby Shoot on Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:02 pm

Rob, that 4th shot could have been a cracker if you had managed to line up the light, the tower and the plane. Or maybe if the plane had been further to the right just above the lamp post.


To tell you the truth i only noticed that lamp post after id put the pic on the computer :)

As for the SOH yeah, ALL my shots of it are crooked. Perhaps an optical illusion from the surrounding area? :P Maybe not :)
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Postby Shoot on Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:04 pm

I'd be tempted to experiment with straightening the verticals (lens distortion) a little in PS


Really? you can do that? :) I guess i should get PS sometime soon. :)

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