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Postby jdear on Fri Jan 26, 2007 10:16 am

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Postby Yi-P on Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:07 am

#3 is great with the light and exposure :D

They're all great shots!! They should be happy with these shots 8)
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:11 am

Jon..

Beautiful. Not only will the B+G be completely over the moon with these, they will land you a lot more business as they are VERY impressive. You've come a hell of a long way over a very short time and it's been great to witness it!

Keep it up.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:12 am

Jonathan I really like this whole set.

#1 Has a great atmopshere about, almost feels Princess in a fairytale style

#2 This ones nice, I would of liked a smidgen more DOF, for for a fine detail shots it's a good one

#3 Love this one its my definite favourite of the 4 shots, just such a happy charming moment, and I love how the gorgeous bride is the centre of it all. Surrounded by, friends, love and laughter.

#4 These shots are always tricky, and while the concept works I think a little bit more focus (it that was possible) would of helped, and or upping the contrast in the reflection a little more ?


I'll take a casual broswe through the rest of the photos, thanks for sharing.

Edit : Just had a look at the other shots and wow most impressive.
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Postby ozimax on Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:02 pm

Wow, these are top drawer wedding photos, the couple should be extremely happy with these. Congrat's on a great set of photos.
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Postby wendellt on Fri Jan 26, 2007 4:43 pm

there ar eheaps of very creative images here and in your other posts
well done
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Postby Alex on Fri Jan 26, 2007 4:47 pm

Love the images, Jonathan. Some very creative work here and very well executed.

Well done!
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Postby Grev on Fri Jan 26, 2007 4:54 pm

Very nicely done, I like all of them.

Especially the last one cos it's so Elliot Erwitt! :D
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Fri Jan 26, 2007 5:33 pm

Wow, breathtaking, and emotional. I love the ideas, many different (and VERY PERSONAL) images of the day, for the happy couple to enjoy.

Sensational, and thanks
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Postby Geoff on Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:27 pm

Some excellent images here Jonathon - well done!
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Postby shutterbug on Fri Jan 26, 2007 9:44 pm

Great stuff :wink:
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