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Postby Alex on Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:49 pm

Well I'm back at it. This time I was aiming for a better figure outline by using a more figure-hugging dress. I wanted to create a semi-silhouette where the facial features are more than silhouette whereas the rest of the body is more of a silhouette. Not sure of I succeeded.

For this I used one sb800 in manual remote modeand a bed sheet for background.

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C&C will be appreciated.

Thanks

Alex
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:54 pm

This has come along way, but the one thing that stands out is the unevens of the coffee table, other then that I like the pose, the shoes are back, and the figure hugging dress and hair all work!
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Postby Alex on Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:07 pm

Thanks Craig. Yes, the table was at an odd angle - I've had too many drinks :lol: :lol:

I've straitghtened it up a bit.

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