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Fashion show

Postby Alex on Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:19 pm

Attended a small fashion show at a shopping centre tonight. The show was part of the L'Oreal fashion week which is currently happening in Melbourne. These were consumer brans mostly.

The lighting wasn't fantastic so had to rely on flash mostly, hence the shadows.

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Metalicus brand:

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"Seduce"

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more of "Seduce" brand

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Thanks

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Postby Zeeps on Thu Mar 08, 2007 2:58 am

Fash seems to have washed them out. Next time try bouncing or diffusing the light.
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Postby hart on Thu Mar 08, 2007 5:15 am

Speaking of flash techniques, this great site was linked in another recent post regarding flash diffusers: http://www.planetneil.com/faq/flash-techniques.html
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Mar 08, 2007 8:42 am

The first two seem a bit washed out but the 3rd is spot on. 4th looks like focus wasn't quite there.

Would have loved to have come but totally forgot about the VIP night.
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Postby johnd on Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:52 pm

You got some good eye contact there Alex. Pity about the lighting needing a flash. If you'd let me know I could have come along with my 85/1.4.

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Postby Alex on Thu Mar 08, 2007 7:34 pm

Thanks every one. I take your point about flash washing out skin tones.

Here is one to redeem myself :-)

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P.s. John didn't realise you were in Melbourne yesterday.
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Postby johnd on Thu Mar 08, 2007 9:39 pm

The skin tones are great in that last one Alex.
With the first 2 shots, maybe you could have backed the flash off a bit or diffused it a little.
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