Sunrise "with" a beauty - Part 2

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Sunrise "with" a beauty - Part 2

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Mar 13, 2007 12:17 pm

hey,

These ones are all a little more arty (bar the last one).

Hope you like them.....thanks for looking and all comments.

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Postby MattyO on Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:23 pm

nice pics again mate. Very jealous!

not really a fan of number 1, i think the sun is too distracting and teh model not exposed enough.

i really like the one with the cloth blowing all teh way to the camera
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:44 pm

Dan - very nice shots and I agree that the shot of the billowing clothe is the standout. BTW, what do you do when it’s too COLD for the models 8)
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:49 pm

I only really like the third one out of this series. As a suggestion, it might have been better if you had the cloth blowing in the wind similar to Priscilla style. The way that it just leads to the model who is located in the centre of the pic, doesn't create a powerful impact to the image.
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Postby dodge on Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:23 am

Very nice Dan..Another shoot well done. :D
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Postby Kyle on Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:37 am

Wow! :)

Lovely work Dan
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Postby byrt_001 on Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:26 am

wow, excellent work

i really like the light and flash balance. what flash that you have used? how did you diffused so well?

thanks for sharing your work
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Postby wendellt on Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:22 am

dan 3rd one is very cool
i rememmber those rocks at coogee to be more whiteish
the mood in the first one is very good well done
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Postby TonyH on Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:59 am

Very nice work, great angles and terrific exposures....
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Mar 15, 2007 11:46 am

wendellt wrote:dan 3rd one is very cool
i rememmber those rocks at coogee to be more whiteish
the mood in the first one is very good well done


It wasnt shot at coogee....

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Postby Glen on Thu Mar 15, 2007 12:45 pm

No 3 is a standout :D
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