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Postby colin_12 on Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:57 pm

I hope that counts as english mods :wink:

A pic from the rail museum in Springwood.

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Postby foonji on Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:50 pm

nice, i like it, i like it alot.

only thing bugging me is that the red horizontal line isn't completely horizontal (looks like it to me... someone else confirm...)... a quick 1-2 degree rotate would fix that :)
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:14 pm

The red looks a bit too saturated on my monitor... the composition is really cool here :D
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Postby colin_12 on Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:54 pm

Thanks Foonji and Yi-P,
I have wound the saturation back about 10% and rotated CCW 0.5 of a degree.
Better?
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Postby Kyle on Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:56 pm

I like the original :)

I've been past there so many times but never visited... I really should some day..
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Postby Raskill on Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:34 pm

foonji wrote: a quick 1-2 degree rotate would fix that :)


Pick out the marksman.... :wink: :lol:

I like the second one. Well done. I've also driven past it numerous times, and never thought to go there.
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