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Postby ATJ on Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:52 pm

Here are a couple of photographs I took last year.

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What do you think?
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:59 pm

Lovely, love the shells and here we see the animal in its natural element.
How deep was this guy swimming ?
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Postby ATJ on Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:04 pm

Only semi-natural.

It was collected in a trap laid at 300m and brought to the surface for weighing and other stats. The shot was taken off the back of the boat just before it was released back into the wild.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:33 pm

ATJ wrote:Only semi-natural.

It was collected in a trap laid at 300m and brought to the surface for weighing and other stats. The shot was taken off the back of the boat just before it was released back into the wild.


Haha, don't spoilt it for me, I'll pretend you cruised past you in a dive :)
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:41 pm

For me the first image here has more impact because we see more of the shell side on. In #2 the side is more in shadow. In both shots there is a cyan tinge in the shadows (more noticeable in #2) and I wonder if there isn't a slight colour adjustment needed in the shadows to bump the red slightly.
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Postby Muzza22au on Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:47 pm

These used to get washed up on KingIsland quite regularly but I have never seen them alive like this before!

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Postby Glen on Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:50 pm

I like both, though a portion of me would like to increase contrast just a bit. Are the colours representative of what you saw?
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Postby ATJ on Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:36 pm

Now that I have my monitor calibrated properly (thanks DaveB), I can see the cyan tinge. I'll see if I can remove it.

The colours of the shell and the animal itself are very close to how they appear in nature - at least when out of the water in sunlight. Underwater, everything looks blue.
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Postby Glen on Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:00 pm

Thanks
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Postby ATJ on Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:06 pm

I hope I haven't gone overboard.

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The colours are still accurate.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:41 pm

The rework is much better and you haven't gone overboard or you'd be wet :lol:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:16 pm

The reworks really pop, and make it feel more like a deep dive (since the water is so dark). The colours appear more natural, and I can't detect a Cyan cast. Well done!
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Postby devilla101 on Thu Mar 22, 2007 6:47 am

Agreed with others. Nice rework. Love the intricate details and colors
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Postby ozimax on Thu Mar 22, 2007 12:58 pm

Have to agree here, the detail and colour are amazing, quite a work of art. I have thoroughly enjoyed looking at this image.

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Postby sheepie on Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:04 pm

Great rework on these :)

My preference goes against most here by the looks of it, as I like the 2nd one most - I like the depth that comes out in it rather than the straight-on view. Balance between colour and exposure is just right, and the black background makes the whole thing sing :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:06 pm

Love the first pic. Shows greater detail in the shell and more of its profile. Lighting is pretty much spot on as well.
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Postby Glen on Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:07 pm

ATJ, I really like the rework, definitely more pop
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Postby ATJ on Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:42 pm

Thanks for the comments.

I do realise that underwater photography is a bit "different", but the result can either be pleasing or not just like any other photograph. The sort of comments posted here have been very helpful in this instance and should also help in others.

As with any other C&C, don't be afraid to say what you think, even if it may not be possible for me to change because of the underwater challenges. I don't hold a grudge - well not for long. :violin:
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