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Postby Willy wombat on Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:10 pm

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Do you think the lack of detail in this picture works? Would you prefer a closer zoom of the rowers or do you like that they are rowing in a big empty space? Is this image too boring?

Thanks for your comments.

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Postby wendellt on Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:13 pm

nice use of negative space but i think there is too much you need to crop bit more, subject is too small
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Postby big pix on Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:16 pm

nice pix........ but have you tried to straighten the rowers and a pano crop, leaving the rowers where they are......
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Postby Willy wombat on Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:40 pm

do you mean a vertical pano like this?

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Or a horizontal pano?
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:45 pm

I like the first/original.

It shows a vast space, provides scale with the subject so insignificant.

I dont see it on a rowing promo, but rather used in marketing a planning solution.

Marketing, like "do you know where you're headed?" Or "are you operating below capacity?"...

I like it, and it works for me.
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:25 pm

Sweet. the second pic looks cool, like one of those 'inspirational' posters often seen in the workplace. :)
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Postby big pix on Sat Mar 24, 2007 6:17 pm

perfect ....... lots of space for type and the bottom half tells the story ....... this would also work as a horizontal crop.......
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:19 am

Plenty of ways to crop this one, but I reckon it would make a great stock photo, as BigPix says plenty of room for inspirations slogans etc..

How did you get this shot, I take it you were airbourne ?
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Postby ozczecho on Sun Mar 25, 2007 10:56 am

WW...love the 1st one...I would not change a single thing, for me your composition works..great shot and well spotted.
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Postby Willy wombat on Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:12 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:How did you get this shot, I take it you were airbourne ?


I was in a hot air balloon for my birthday in May last year.

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Postby Ollie on Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:13 pm

I agree with all the comments posted.

Great use of negative space :).
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Postby Critter on Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:07 pm

I really like the first one, reminded me of a shot I took in San Francisco in front of the Golden Gate Bridge. I had a little fiddle with yours in PS and probably prefer it with a little more contrast a levels tweak, which then requires a noise filter pass, which went bad because of the lack of megapixels in the original posted pic, but I reckon that would look great on a canvas print...
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