Sydney in Black and White

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Sydney in Black and White

Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:13 pm

Here are some black and white shots, something I'm not particularly good at, but I'm trying to improve. All of these were taken in the later part of the day as the clouds and rain rolled in, it made for some interesting skys. Critical feedback is welcome!

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Postby NJ on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:19 pm

clouds look really awesome in the first craig!

was that taken with a wide angle??
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:21 pm

NJ wrote:clouds look really awesome in the first craig!

was that taken with a wide angle??


All shots care of the 18-200VR. But it was at it's widest for this shot.
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Postby NJ on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:26 pm

oh cool, seems a lot wider, like a 12-24 or something, very nice. the black and whites are great btw, although on this crappy laptop monitor it looks like number 2 could do with a tad more contrast. i'm most likely im wrong tho.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:30 pm

NJ wrote:oh cool, seems a lot wider, like a 12-24 or something, very nice. the black and whites are great btw, although on this crappy laptop monitor it looks like number 2 could do with a tad more contrast. i'm most likely im wrong tho.
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Thanks NJ, I had intentionally kept the contrast a little lighter on the 2nd shot to keep a bit more detail in the trees, that may of been a mistake.. but it looks ok to me just lighter in comparison...
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:30 pm

Craig - #1 and #2 are excellent shots, especially in B&W - great detail. Can’t comment on #3 and #4 as I am STD of the SOH :lol:
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:24 am

The skies in #1 and #4 are really cool :)

I'm not very convinced by the subjects/angle here, have you got the one with the busker? Maybe that angle could work better??
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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:06 am

Craig, #1 is a stunner. Great shot and PP. :up:

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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:09 am

Nnnnsic wrote:Craig, #1 is a stunner. Great shot and PP. :up:

Chris... you're a Sexually Transmitted Disease of the Sydney Opera House? Damn... you're more sick than I thought...


:lol: :lol: :lol: Sick to Death :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:09 am

sirhc55 wrote: :lol: :lol: :lol: Sick to Death :lol: :lol: :lol:


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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:05 am

Craig, I feel the first one is probably the strongest out of this set. The lower angle which you have taken the image accentuates the height and dynamism of the clouds, resulting in a stronger image. The clouds help lead the eye to the buildings, as if they didn't stand out enough :)
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