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by makario on Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:12 pm
Its been awhile since I posted any images.
Here is one I took over the weekend after a photoshoot that the wife and I went for, since she was all dolled up, she was more than happy to pose for me.
While she loves it, she wants a virtual tummy tuck, but seeing that I dont know how to achieve this in PS any tips welcome.
C&C welcome, but please be gentle as it took me ages to get permission to upload this image.
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by sirhc55 on Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:39 pm
Mak - nice photo. I would look at cloning out the right and left shadows on your wifes tummy for starters and see how it looks. Always work on a duplicate copy so you still have the original 
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by Oz_Beachside on Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:07 am
A fast way
copy the layer
menu: Filters>Liquify > > Pinch (left side of dialog box, looks like a pincushion)
make brush about size of skin area, and just a few clicks, then move to side, and click piece by piece.
Take care to position the crosshairs central to the skin area.
More advanced way, select the area, use Edit>Free Transform. - then move selection to desired outcome.
Another option is to use Edit > Transform > Distort (perspective?).
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by makario on Tue Mar 27, 2007 9:48 am
Thanks Chris and Oz, will have a play when I get home.
A quick blurb on the setup, I used a white sheet as the background and any white cloth I could find to cover up the brown carpet. Then went to PS and played with curves and increased the highlight values so that the background turned to white.
Since I was aiming for a high-key photo, can anyone critique my technique (its ok to be brutal) or is there something I should/shouldnt have done??
Cheers
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by Reschsmooth on Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:14 pm
I have a crappy monitor at work, so take my comments with a grain of salt.
The lighting looks good, although it looks like you have cloned the background to get the even white, especially around her feet? To me, it looks a little unnatural. Now, if this isn't the case, I will go to the optometrist this afternoon
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by makario on Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:55 pm
guilty!!! since I had to use bits and pieces of white cloth from around the house sine the white sheet wasnt big enough, I did a bit of cloning around the feet
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by Matt. K on Tue Mar 27, 2007 9:49 pm
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Nice image. A high key image is more than just a white background. It generally refers to an image that has no, or very few dark tones at all, such as a white dove on a white tablecloth. It also demands very specfic exposure compensation and processing. Can I suggest you try again, with your wife dressed in white, white gloves and perhaps a white umbrella as a prop. Try overexposing the image by a stop or two (bracket your exposures), and see what turns up.
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by makario on Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:57 pm
Thanks Matt for the feedback. I will have another go at the high-key technique!!
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