Both shot with the 85/1.8. C&C welcome.
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Afternoon portraits
Both shot with the 85/1.8. C&C welcome. So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
the first one should be in This months "Elements in Style" exercise as it would be the first conforming entry and you could pick next months topic.
Contre-jour for sure 
http://www.dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?p=294433&highlight=#294433
She was between me and the sun - I just dialled in some negative exposure compensation to make her a silhouette
Firsty, it was actually taken last month, so I don't think it qualifies. Will definitely be participating in this month's ES though  So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
The first one is magnificent, no doubts.
But I like the second one, it tells a story of Kris intently looking for that next shot on a nice afternoon, finger poised on the shutter release 
Rooboy
First is excellent...second shot, your subject looks to limp/placid. You need to get her animated in order to get some interesting lines and negative spaces in the image. A hand on her hip and a stance with attitude would have worked wonders. I do love the light and background treatment. Regards
Matt. K
Love the first and the second Patrick well done, and credit to Kris for providing the modelling. I assume the second was a candid ? If not then as Matt said you could bring more of a dynamic feel to it, with a slightly more dramatic pose.
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