First HDR attempt - Natural Arch

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First HDR attempt - Natural Arch

Postby Gordon on Thu Jun 07, 2007 11:08 am

On a trip to SE Qld last weekend for a mountain biking race at Kooralbyn I had a couple of hours spare and decided to re-visit Natural Arch. I last went there over 20 years ago, before all access restrictions were in place, but the dynamic range of the scene on a sunny day was way too much for slide film.
I figured this would be a perfect test for Photomatix, which I had downloaded a couple of months ago, but not yet tried.

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D200 + Sigma 30mm @f/8 and 4 exposures ranging from 1/8 to 1sec. Photos taken with a cloudy sky WB, but I have added a bit more yellow as the sky reflection on some rocks was rather blue.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jun 07, 2007 11:09 am

Nicely done Gordon, it looks natural which isn't always easy when doing HDRs, you've done a good job, with a challenging scene.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Jun 07, 2007 11:53 am

Knowing the spot Gordon I can say that you have done very well. This is better than most HDRs I have seen from the same spot. :D
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Postby Gordon on Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:04 pm

Thanks, I was surprised at how easy it was to get a natural looking image, having seen some of the excessively colourful HDR images around.
I think it gives a reasonably good representation of how it appeared to my eye.
I was crouched down on the platform with the lens looking through a gap in the fence, whilst hordes of Japanese tourists milled around. I had a quiet chuckle to myself as in the middle of the chatter in Japanese I heard one say "ahhhhhh professional"
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:38 pm

Gordon wrote:I was crouched down on the platform with the lens looking through a gap in the fence, whilst hordes of Japanese tourists milled around. I had a quiet chuckle to myself as in the middle of the chatter in Japanese I heard one say "ahhhhhh professional"


I can picture it now.
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Postby Pehpsi on Thu Jun 07, 2007 6:30 pm

Beautiful, looks great and very natural. I know what you mean about the colourful HDR's. Composition is perfect too i think.
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Postby devilla101 on Thu Jun 07, 2007 7:53 pm

Excellent shot. Really looks natural and well expose
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Postby Big V on Thu Jun 07, 2007 7:57 pm

Gordan, this is very well executed nice balance and no false colouring. On a side note, I see Rob has bagged his 34th comet.. no hope for the rest of us now :)
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Postby Gordon on Thu Jun 07, 2007 8:27 pm

yea, it will be hard for anyone to catch him! I found another one the other day too, but it didn't look like a comet at discovery, so its another Comet Siding Spring. Rob later added 6 X 60 sec exposures of it together in very good seeing, and it had a bare minimum of coma visible even then.

Thought I was going to have a clear night tonight as it cleared at sunset, but lots of cloud/fog forming already ;(
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:29 pm

Wow fantastic colours.......looks great and as others have said look natural.........well done!

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Postby Matt. K on Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:04 pm

Beautiful! A competition winner! If only you had a water babe under those falls! :D
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