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Postby khalil on Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:24 pm

Just did some pp on a nothing shot. i guess in some ways its a attempt at "street" photography.

so let me know what you think.


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Postby Killakoala on Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:58 pm

It's candid, it's arty, it works for me :)
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Postby fishafotos on Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:40 pm

I like it alot. I like the pp especially.
The only thing I could suggest would be that the wording does not have a whole lot of 'punch'. Perhaps a lower angle, getting closer to the words and having them fill more of the frame could have made them more significant.

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Postby Bindii on Wed Jun 06, 2007 10:55 pm

Its quirky....and I like quirky...the pp is excellent...its got a gritty feel to it which suits this style of street togging nicely I think...I maybe would have liked a tad more clearance above the guys head...but its still good as it stands though..

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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Jun 06, 2007 11:00 pm

Fantastic shot love the tonal range and texture.......the colbat blue rocks!!
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Postby khalil on Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:34 pm

i saw it printed on the footpath and tried to take the photo as quick as possible cause as soon as have a camera in your hand people like to cross the road :oops:

and my only regret was not taking it from a lower position.
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