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Postby NJ on Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:09 pm

did a shoot for my mates band. i had a great location planned until i was told that we had to go to one of the member's house. so i ended up with no good location instead. one suggestion was to take some shot in the laundry lol. it was alright, but then i noticed the shower...heres what i got...

one too many drinks :lol:
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and the group shot from the laundry...wanted a ghostly feel...
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C&C always appreciated, thanks for looking :)
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Postby Louie on Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:56 pm

I like the first three, you have done well with them given your limited opportunities!

The fourth one has some kind of reflection through it? I don't know if that is intended or not but it is a bit too distracting for me.

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ps Are they a good band???
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:22 pm

Good work on these Nathan

#1 crop out the shower head and I think it would be a stronger image. #3 is by far the best IMHO. Very like a band shot if that makes sense.
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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:49 pm

For me the third is best - great lighting and comp, but still looks 'edgy' (one of the stupidest words currently used, but, hey! :lol: )
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Postby NJ on Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:11 pm

thanks for the feedback guys! yeah the third shot is my fav as well, he was more than happy with the result :)
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