appreciate feedback on any aspect of these;
#1 - I considered cropping the bottom of this up to the bra, what do you think?
#2
#3
PS: Dan, Lauren is heading to Sydney if you may be interested?
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C&C please - portraits from weekend
some images from this weekend...
appreciate feedback on any aspect of these; #1 - I considered cropping the bottom of this up to the bra, what do you think?
#2
#3 PS: Dan, Lauren is heading to Sydney if you may be interested?
Agree, just ran out of time. Here is same, with a minor crop, I like this better as it takes the "bra" look out. 
Bruce,
As was said by others for no. 1. The style of shot does not really do it for me. It also looks like it's OOF or at least I can't see any point of distinct sharpness. No. 2 the pose just looks awkward and unnatural to me. Otherwise a nice sharp photo. No.3 is probably the strongest of the lot, although I do find it a bit tightly cropped at the top. Cheers Alex
I was thinking the same. Looks to be in focus around the pendant, but the face is soft. EDIT: Looking again, I think it's all soft, but could be my eyes! I like #3 though.
thanks for your feedback. the softness is a result of post processing, so lots of room for improvement there, as the unedits are sharp. next on my learnings list is how to direct more natural posing to beginner models. appreciative of good feedback
#2 looks like she's either a) experiencing lower back pain, b) doing some strange kind of exercise, or c) farting.
The other's are tops.
Number three for me mate, i still think they look a little soft??? Maybe just me, but nice work man!
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