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The first one is my pick, and shame in the last you didn't get eye contact from both, but that is perfectly understandable as I'm sure you had plenty of competition.
Yep, you are right! ![]()
1 and 3 are great. Love how the background in 1 came out, although would be slightly better with more room at the bottom. Great stuff!
Alex
Didn't DJs ship over a whole boatload of 'important' big name international models in order to compete with Myer's one hawttie Jennifer Hawkins?
Did you use flash for the runway shots? It looks very well lit compared to prev launch shows.
http://flickr.com/photos/jekoseventy/1058274749/in/set-72157601317370368/
i think this one is your best one it has depth and has compacted the 3 most important people in 1 shot megan oz supermodels Kristy Hinz and Catherine McNeil Wendell Levi Teodoro
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Thanks Guys,
for Alex, at the bottom of #1 where heads and a little fountain, so I'd crop it. Onyx, Not flash for the runway and Thanks Wendell, that shot it is a sweet lovely candy! A concentrate of Australian beauty!
i think also you need to be more discerning about the photos you post
in a reportage sense the others dont say much compared to the one i choose and on top of it its a very nice photo the one of emma on the runway for example isn't flattering to her or the fashion its too isolated once you get a trained eye for editing youll notice your photography will improve Wendell Levi Teodoro
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You are right,and I some way I know it. But I mentioned David Jones and the summer collection so I just contextualised my pics in relation to the event. That's they were teaching to the PJ's course overseas. The old concept of 5 W. Last edited by Jeko70 on Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
of course didnt mean to be mean about it
just saying from your gallery to what you posted i dont think you posted the best, and i think you should where the hell is that shot of me and catherine mcNeil Wendell Levi Teodoro
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I have not edited all, but your pic is in a safe strong-box. A sort of "the best wine" in my cellar. ![]() ![]()
your a superstar
Wendell Levi Teodoro
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Wendell - The sections isn't always about posting your best shots, its about posting images you want reviewed and critiqued by your peers, so in this instance I think Fab can post this shots, he's linked to the gallery so anyone interested can look at the other shots.
i also think to be a good photographer you need to be a good editor
so i helped him realise that in that respect perception is almost everything Wendell Levi Teodoro
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Lovely images Jeko. I agree with Wendell in that this image is the pick (but what the hell would Wendell know
![]() http://flickr.com/photos/jekoseventy/10 ... 317370368/ (love this one) cheers marco
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