C&C Please. Particularly in relation to the cropping
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Brissy Sunrise
It was too calm to fly yesterday so I tried to capture the sunrise.
C&C Please. Particularly in relation to the cropping
Steve
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For me, the third is the winner here Steve.
The first is almost there but seems a little cramped horizontally. The second is crying out for more foreground; just a tad lower. The problem with that Kangaroo Point vantage spot is that great chunk of black nothingness where the Gardens and mangroves are. Perhaps two versions blended - one with the Gardens area brightened up a bit so it doesn't appear so bland but still adds more room at the bottom of the shot? Hope this makes sense. Simon
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totally agree with Simons view as that was my exact thoughts as i scrolled the pics down.
Shane
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Yep me three.... third one...
I really like the metallic effect of the water Steve... very nice!  The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list...
I have unsqueezed the 2nd one a bit. The first is essentially uncropped so I can't do much with it except file it in the round.
Thanks for the comments Steve
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Looks much better 'unsqueezed' in both senses (ie not wedged between the other two photos anymore, as well as crop change
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I really like the third one too, but maybe with a tad less sky at the top? My humble unlearned opinion. Cheers, Elena Elena
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