Rocky beach C&C _ PS noob

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Rocky beach C&C _ PS noob

Postby rah on Sat Aug 11, 2007 5:07 pm

Tried to make a dull beach shot more interesting.
Overdone it may be but I like the look.
C&C's welcomed. Image manipulation welcomed too.
Thick skinned so go for it! :wink:

Before:

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5664/b ... rigkh3.jpg



After:

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Postby daniel_r on Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:18 pm

Hi

Learning the tricks of post processing and photoshop can be every bit as difficult as capturing what you had in mind with the camera.

A couple of PP / Photoshop pointers:
* know roughly what you want to get out of the image - what effect do you want to portray to the viewer - snapshot / landscape / fine art etc.

* crop freely. remove any thing that doesn't add to the image

* what subject are you trying to show - highlight that area, draw attention there.

* be wary of "overdoing it". A overdone processing job will draw the attention to the processing, rather than the image itself.

* have a general hunch about the photo you're about to process - are you on a rescue mission? Sometimes no amount of processing can save an image from the bin.

* revisit any image you're unsure about - you may think of a different approach later.


Anyway, I've had a very quick play around with the image in the link.
the changes were:
- colour balance correction (White Balance / tone cast)
- some dodging
- some burning
- channel and specific area saturation (some desat + sat)
- general sharpening, and some area sharpening


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Postby Louie on Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:49 pm

Daniel_R, I really like what you have done with that.
Good to have more tips and ideas on how to save a image.
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Postby rah on Sun Aug 12, 2007 12:43 am

Wow. Thanks for taking the time.
Actually I did go away and then come back to look at the work I had done with fresh eyes and wasn't really happy with what I saw.

Your work is much more how I would like to have it look. I always underestimate the power of a simple crop.
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Postby rah on Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:57 pm

Ok, I took your advice on board and had another crack at it.
This is another shot I took the same day.
I thought about the story I wanted told and the effect I wanted.
I cropped heavily until I was happy with how the image was portrayed. I adjusted levels sharpened and came out with this.

Suggestions and criticisms again welcomed.
I want to get the hang of the basics before upgrading to a DSLR!

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