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Second one but in colour
![]() The first one is nice but it looks too "clean" Photography, as a powerful medium of expression and communications, offers an infinite variety of perception, interpretation and execution. Ansel Adams
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ok it looks like #2 is the go
but so far I have 3 different treatments suggested Theodoros likes B&W as above André wants color ![]() Dan wants it like #1 (can't do due to different coloring of buildings and only allowed to use basic editing) this is as close as I can get starting with the firsts settings = desaturated look ![]() so where to now ![]()
I'm going to go against the flow here and say that I actually prefer #1, perhaps with the blowout toned down a bit in the lamp. Perhaps I've done too many of the swooshing low perspective wide angle photos myself
![]() EDIT - having just seen the two extras... I like the second desat shot overall ![]()
2nd one how it is in the original post
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My overall preference, this one:
http://mcgoffs.net/gallery/d/951-1/_KM34330-3.jpg
I agree with Onyx. Muted works for this shot - overly saturated is a bit too much with the sandstone, and the black and white is nicely balanced but I think it needs more contrast.
Desaturated gives you the striking blue from the cylindrical building continuing all the way 'down' to the blue of the bus, along with the wash of the sky... while the gradual transition of the sandstone buildings from dark(er) to light(er) from right to left also works. (Funnily, of the first two choices I would have initially gone for #1. But it is getting late!) Pentax istDS+K10D. Pentax 50mm f1.4, Sigma 10-20mm, Tamron 90mm f2.8 macro, Kit Lenses. http://www.redbubble.com/people/berndt2
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