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Tereza part 2

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Tereza part 2

Postby gooseberry on Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:07 am

A while ago I posted a B&W image from a shoot I did with Tereza. Finally had some time recently to go through and process some more of the photos. Posting one of my favourites from the set - appreciate any comments with regards to the pose, framing etc.

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Postby Alex on Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:47 am

Nice. I like the cool tones in the image. Very suitable pose and facial expression.

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Postby firsty on Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:30 am

I like the pose, it fits the style of clothes / hair and the location

as for the crop... I would like to see a little more space above her (not a lot as that would ruin the slight edginess of the photo)

I like the overall coloring but there seems to be a lot of magenta creeping into the blown highlights.... top left, lights on the right and her dress below the exposed shoulder... but I'm not sure how you could removed that without changing the tone (maybe just use the desaturate brush on those areas)
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:47 pm

That's an interesting image but I;m not sure why. Lots of quirky elements, unusual composition...and that hair!
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Postby gooseberry on Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:27 am

Thanks guys for the feedback.

firsty, yeah, didn't really notice the magenta cast in the highlights until you mentioned it, and checking the numbers in PS, it is a fair amount of magenta there. Thanks for pointing it out.
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Postby olrac on Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:16 am

I find the diagonal line draws my eye away from her,
maybe a little more or the wall on the left of the image would balance this out.
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