
Advise or ur fav between the four would be appreciated...........


Headshot.......no flash

Natural light

Cheers
Dan
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Calling all models to spaceport delta...........lunar landers will be launching soon.........
![]() Advise or ur fav between the four would be appreciated........... ![]() ![]() Headshot.......no flash ![]() Natural light ![]() Cheers Dan
from a composition point of view, second one for me Dan.
first has two subjects, so I dont "know" where to look (but I do) ![]() first also has a contradiction, the window frame shape light on the wall, and the night scape. nice edits too.
the first one looks likes a half arsed attempt at cutting and pasting the black on the inside of the window sill looks dodgey
the second one hits the mark for composition and the moon being added in but I am not a fan of the model being overexposed (at least on my monitor) the other two are up to your usual standard.
Lol after seeing Wendell's latest and greatest, i don't even want to look at my camera ever again, let alone take the shitty images i take with it........he is amazing......there is NO hope for me though, too old and way past it...and i just dont have THAT technical side or THAT eye for composition he has......lol
I really like #1 (over #2),
#3 is sharp, good colour, & great lighting. Not sure about her expression though? And a tiny bit of arm (?) that needs cloning bottom right I think. #4 is a beauty, and my fave. Love the wall with the vines and great use of natural light. You always live up to your name in terms of being creative! Nikon D70
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#1 or #4 are my faves, depending on the theme. I quite like #2 as well... the pose in #3 looks a bit odd. But a nice group!
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um usually i am shooting with 17-35mm 2.8 Nikon.....sometimes 70-200mm 2.8 VR Nikon and 50mm 1.4 Nikon
The last one is very nice. I do like the composition style on this one. The lighting is nice too. It works well for the image.
Steve.
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Hey i am not sure, at times i struggle with it (purely user error i might add as well........lol) yeah, but other than that its a great lens.....i have a fear that mine back focuses ![]() Dan
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