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by Oz_Beachside on Sat Sep 15, 2007 11:36 pm
hello, love to hear your feedback on some shots from today.
Had a lot of fun, and love the WB preset with my new expo disc!
look forward to your feedback, warmest regards, bruce.
#1 - anyone for tennis?
#2 - touch of tomb raider
#3 - they dont make can openers like they used to...
let me know you have been here, and drop in a comment 
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by Reschsmooth on Sat Sep 15, 2007 11:40 pm
Nice shots (and yeah, pretty girl  )
My criticisms of the first are:
1. The crinkling of the "ground" in the first is a little off-putting.
2. I would like to see the model's face in no 1 with a bit more lighting.
Regards, Patrick
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by Oz_Beachside on Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:57 am
thanks for your feedback patrick, much appreciated.
I thought the same, high contract lighting makes for very careful posing variations in between.
on the tennis one, I cloned out some of the wrinkles in the fabric, just left that one there. I think it might be better in the future, to pin that ribbon down, and maybe tape the fabric to the floor...
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