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by devilla101 on Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:46 pm
Heya folks
This is my first foray into this type of photography. After a couple of weeks of planning (researching, meeting with models and more researching) we were ready for prime time! I basically wanted to do something really different and more dramatic and I think I delivered since my family and friends were floored by the results (probably cause I kept it a closely guarded secret)
Anyway Here are the results of the Sunday shooting. C&C most appreciated.
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by wendellt on Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:48 pm
excellent work all aspects spot on its very herb ritz
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by Alpha_7 on Tue Sep 25, 2007 9:05 pm
Wow, I really like these you've done an excellent job!
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by Reschsmooth on Tue Sep 25, 2007 9:48 pm
Very awesome shots.
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by Matt. K on Tue Sep 25, 2007 9:56 pm
Excellent images! Strong, dynamic composition and technically beautiful!
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by Glen on Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:16 pm
Very impressive Ron 
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by Louie on Tue Sep 25, 2007 11:00 pm
To echo the above, very impressive images!
I like the lines, composition and general mood (if that makes sense) of the last two best.
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by Div on Tue Sep 25, 2007 11:52 pm
Really great work!
My pick is number 3. Great image. I do find the clouds though a little bit distracting...I think with the BW conversion it may be a stronger image without them.....
Keep up the good work!
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by Oz_Beachside on Wed Sep 26, 2007 12:02 am
great job, very well done!! love the pose, and the contrast, sand to sky, very nice lighting!
all great!
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by Geoff on Wed Sep 26, 2007 12:06 am
Excellent results - well done!
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by Steffen on Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:06 am
I'm not an expert in male body appreciation, but the composition and especially the tones are first class. I think for me the tonal scale makes the images. I love the stark contrast between sand and sky, and the model connecting the two...
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by beetleboy on Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:05 am
Absolutely beautiful work here. I wouldn't be surprised if you said you'd been shooting for Black&White magazine for years!
Especially love the second shot, it has a kind of femininity yet maintains the male form thru the strength highlighted by the shadows on the muscles.
Great job.
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by Heath Bennett on Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:58 am
Perfect tones and inspired work. Great model and location selection too.
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by gstark on Wed Sep 26, 2007 8:40 am
Ron,
Great shooting, and great post as well.
A couple of very minor criticisms ... in #3 ... I'd have liked to have seen a slightly wider angle, or a slightly different angle of view; one that kept the subject's feet within the frame.
And in #4 - which is my favourite, btw - I'm wondering if you can bring out just a little more detail and texture in the sand? It's already a great image, but in the foreground I can see a little bit of texture in the sand that has ripples leading towards the subject. I think it may help if these could be brought out a little more.
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by sirhc55 on Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:07 am
Herbert List, Duane Michals, Barbara Bordnick, Kenro Izu and now Ron - you join a very elite group with some superb pics
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by devilla101 on Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:37 am
Thanks everyone for the encouraging comments, I'm still exploring with this type of photography and hopefully I will can approach more people willing to do something similar.
Gary, love your eyes mate, your constructive feedback is always bought on board.
sirhc55 I have no idea who those people are, but I'll google them when I get the chance and get some ideas
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by zafra52 on Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:51 pm
Excellent photography! I like the compositions and your choice of black and white.
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by Bindii on Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:39 pm
Well I'm drooling so that must mean that I think they are good...
actually they are better than good.. they are excellent!
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by norbs on Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:44 pm
I don't remember signing the release for these! 
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by Bindii on Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:47 pm
norbs wrote:I don't remember signing the release for these! 
Soooo....
do you come here often.... 
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by daniel_r on Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:31 pm
This is some fine work. As Beetleboy says, it could be straight out of Black+White magazine (if you haven't already, check it out - available at most newsagents with a decent Photo Mag section (not MyFirstDigiCam)
Being your first attempt at this kind of photography, I think you're on to something! 
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