Girlband SOS - Modeling Shoot

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Girlband SOS - Modeling Shoot

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:06 pm

Thanks for looking........... :D

Comments welcome.............

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Postby Bindii on Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:28 pm

I like the saturated colours in the rock/beachy shots... but its the second image that catches my eye the most... very nice... :)
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Postby bwhinnen on Sun Oct 21, 2007 3:51 pm

I don't usually comment much on your pics Dan as they are of a high quality ;)

But I think the fourth one lets you down a bit with the lack of skin tones on the LHS of all the girls (I understand that is where the light was originating).

The others are great, specially the second, even with her looking out of frame it is a captivating shot, and makes me wonder 'who' has caught her attention.
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Oct 21, 2007 6:21 pm

another tough day at the office Dan! :D

I've grown to like your style of skin treatment, you are at least consistent with its application.

watch bleaching eyes and teeth too much in the second.

2 and 3 are my favourites.
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Postby wendellt on Sun Oct 21, 2007 11:47 pm

i like how you use the colourful background to suppliment the styling
that rockface in the 3rd is great
always very vibrant work id just pay more attention to refining the poses a bit more so they look a bit more natural, i'm sure these girls have enough vibrancuy to shine on their own without too much direction

are these the girls from the band 'Girlband' from memory there were more blondes
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Postby Big Red on Sun Oct 21, 2007 11:54 pm

#2 i really like bcause of the skin tone 8)
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Re: Girlband SOS - Modeling Shoot

Postby robw25 on Sun Oct 21, 2007 11:55 pm

Thanks for looking


your kidding me !! thanks for posting

cheers rob
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Oct 22, 2007 12:02 am

first and second are the standout ones. compositionally and pose wise, you're improving which is great to see.

the third pic, the positioning of her feet make her look like she's really unbalanced or fearful of falling (i would be!).
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Mon Oct 22, 2007 12:15 am

Thanks guys much appreciated.... :D
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