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by -=Monty=- on Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:52 am
I'm currently in my birth country, South Africa, having a good time, other than some recent threats to our safety (almost had our car stolen. have no idea how the 2010 fifa will happen here) Anyway, to the photo. It was taken in the Kruger National park about a week ago. 6 exposures were taken of which 3 were used, combined using HDR. Luckily the elephant stood still long enough for my D300 to take 3 photos (so about half a second :p) PP is just HDR tweaking and a little cloning to fix what photomatrix did. I think the HDR came out prety interstingly in this case. I usually dont use HDR much, but thought this was a little different.  More kruger shots: viewtopic.php?f=18&t=30429
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by Reschsmooth on Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:24 am
I really like this. It is hard to explain why I do, but I do. My only comment would be to perhaps crop a bit from right (and top) to center the elephant more.
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by radar on Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:17 am
I also quite like it. As Patrick says, a tighter crop would suit in this case. Maybe try it in sepia, a bit in the Nick Brandt style http://www.nickbrandt.comCheers, André
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by Mr Darcy on Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:33 am
I don't know about this one. I really like the landscape &clouds, but the elephant looks like a cardboard cutout propped in the savannah. It just looks as though it is not part of the scene.
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by Alpha_7 on Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:58 am
I like the HDR effect (I've been using it a fair bit myself) I kind of like the current crop as I like the elephant not being the complete centre of attention, the clouds and vegetation are just as interesting for me.
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by chrisk on Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:00 pm
-=Monty=- wrote:I'm currently in my birth country, South Africa, having a good time, other than some recent threats to our safety (almost had our car stolen. have no idea how the 2010 fifa will happen here) Anyway, to the photo. It was taken in the Kruger National park about a week ago. 6 exposures were taken of which 3 were used, combined using HDR. Luckily the elephant stood still long enough for my D300 to take 3 photos (so about half a second :p) PP is just HDR tweaking and a little cloning to fix what photomatrix did. I think the HDR came out prety interstingly in this case. I usually dont use HDR much, but thought this was a little different.  More kruger shots: http://www.dslrusers.net/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=30429
ok...that is INSANELY awesome. dayummmm i friggin love it. is this on flickr anywhere ? i'd like to fave it pls and link it to a few people that i know will be interested to have a look at this.
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by obzelite on Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:05 pm
i like this as well, hdr really suits it
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by Ladybird on Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:52 pm
I think this really awesome as well. The HDR gives the effect that this is almost an etching.
And I like the current crop as well - like said previously, the background is just as interesting as the elephant itself.
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by Big V on Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:34 pm
This is an excelelnt result - the treatment really suits the subject - awesome
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by -=Monty=- on Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:06 pm
Thanks guys. I tried a tighter crop, but didn't really like it, the whole photo focussed too much on the elephant, and i think that shouldn't be the main and only focus of the photo.
Sepia with HDR i think may look a little strange, but i might as well try it out.
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by -=Monty=- on Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:32 pm
Thought i might as well try somthing a little different. Have some time to kill. With the center crop, everything fits almost 100% into thirds. 
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by radar on Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:33 pm
Monty,
very nice variation the second one, well done.
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by Matt. K on Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:16 pm
What a bizaar, surrealistic photograph! Brilliant!
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by Big V on Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:27 pm
Ohh yeeah - that works too!!
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by Handlebars on Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:04 pm
Thats really really nice. Would like to see the coloured version cropped to thirds too 
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by MATT on Thu Jan 17, 2008 10:38 am
Excellent work.. I like both the first colour and the BW version..
The 3 frames you used where they all different exposure values or just three of the same?? ie 3 frame Bracketed?
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by -=Monty=- on Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:02 am
The shots taken were taken using BKT on the camera. I didn't get the frames i really wanted (because the exposure was already set on +.7, i think) but the frames i ended up using were: +1.7 0 -0.7 Cropped Colour 
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by marcotrov on Thu Jan 24, 2008 7:05 pm
Monty this is both an interesting and very artistic interpretation of an iconic element of the African savannah. I love it. cheers marco
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by matt-chops on Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:09 pm
That is brilliant. The colour and contrast in the shot make it look almost painted. Nice work. 
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by robert on Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:57 pm
I saw this a few weeks ago when it came up, and really like both the colour and b&w. I found myself remebering it and wanting to see it again. Such amazing stuff- really love it.
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by Willy wombat on Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:38 pm
Love it - a very good use of HDR. 
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by ozimax on Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:31 pm
Sensational image here, what a composition, angry sky, green grass and...well..grey elephant. Very enjoyable stuff.
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by rookie2 on Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:33 am
this caught my eye straight away - something quite differen to many other HDR treatments. Subject and backgrounds form an interesting composition for me.
I really like the second crop - I can just catch the glint in its eye.
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by -=Monty=- on Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:11 pm
Wow, almost a month after posting the image still getting positive replys. Thanks guys!!
I'll dig up my collection and see if i can make anymore HDR wildlife photos.
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