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Phoebe at Home

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Phoebe at Home

Postby losfp on Sun Sep 21, 2008 11:16 pm

My, but it's been a LONG TIME since I was in here. Work has been really busy, and of course we now have a financial burden to attend to. Been taking lots of photos of course, but most of the opportunistic type, and nothing really to display on the forums.

This weekend though, we did a couple of "proper" shoots with Phoebe (she is now almost 5 months old). On Saturday, we took her out to Fagan Park, near Galston.. and on Sunday, we took some shots at home.

Keen to get a bit of feedback - been out of the game for a few months now :)

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This is the second shoot. Material from spotlight, rigged up to a makeshift background stand (if you must know, it was two microphone stands, with a curtain rod across the top).

D300, 17-55/2.8 @ f/2.8. 2 SB-800s, mounted on stands with shoot-through white brollies and triggered with pocket wizards.

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Re: Phoebe at Home

Postby Bindii on Mon Sep 22, 2008 8:54 am

2nd one is a definate keeper...its cute as and worthy of framing..

the other two don't do a lot for me I'm afraid.. I don't think the angles you have used in those are flattering to her at all.. sorry.. :)
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Re: Phoebe at Home

Postby gesteer on Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:01 am

Well done. Very Anne Geddes!
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