First batch of holiday images

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First batch of holiday images

Postby leek on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:37 pm

I just managed to get Photoshop loaded on my wife's laptop, so here are a few random images from our holiday so far...
<table width=600>
<tr><td width=50%>Image</td><td width=50%> Kuala Lumpur Airport Terminal</td></tr>
<tr><td width=50%> Open top tourist bus in London on a freezing cold day</td><td width=50%>Image</td></tr>
<tr><td width=50%>Image</td><td width=50%> Thatched cottage in the village of Hungerford
(Scene of the 1987 Hungerford Massacre when 16 people were shot dead in the street by Michael Ryan [the UK's version of Port Arthur]
</td></tr>
<tr><td width=50%>Country Path & Tree</td><td width=50%>Image</td></tr>
</table>
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Postby Geoff on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:46 pm

Lovely John, lovely!!
The bus top is my fave with a close 2nd or equal being your first image at the Kuala Lumpa Airport!

It's currently sitting at around 29 degrees in Sydney, and it's 9:45pm.

Enjoy the cold crisp air my friend....Merry Christmas to you and your family. Have a safe, happy enjoyable trip and enjoy the times with your relos..

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:47 pm

John - why don’t you bugger off with your pics :lol: :lol: :lol:

But seriously, you are making me very homesick with some great reminders of the old country - please keep them coming :)
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Postby NJ on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:47 pm

they are stunning shots there. i love the second picture, the colours are a great contrast to the sky. i really like all the shots though. good stuff!
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Postby big pix on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:47 pm

very very nice......... I do like the last one the most.........
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:00 pm

John

#2 is superb. You have fantastic leading lines with a suitable subject at the end. You've got the colour contrast between the red of the seats and the blue of the sky. Then ther's the avenue of building either side of the bus. A compositional masterpiece to be proud of. It even makes England look sunny. My only real criticism is that next time get the driver to drive down the middle of the street :wink:

#1 is very similar stylistically with similar strengths. I particularly like the longer exposure giving a little motion blur for the people on the travelator.

#3 - doesn't grab me greatly. It might have been more interesting with a person walking past or a bike propped up against the wall.

#4 - the B & W really accentuates the starkness of this wintery scene. And dare I say it, nice leading lines again and rule of thirds (almost). Oh and just in case it's not obvious - I like this one too :D

I hope the three of you have a great traditional Welsh Christmas (whatever that is - but I bet there'll be alcohol and singing!)
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Postby marcotrov on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:15 pm

#2 Is terrific John1 Vibrant contrasting colours and the composition make this pic. like the airport one too good sense of balance. Have fun, stay safe and merry Xmas :)
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Postby Paul on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:58 pm

The 2nd shot is superb John! :D
So how is the tempreture? :wink: :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:00 am

John
The bus. Outstanding. A work of art. It's why I love this forum. I look forward to seeing a large print.
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Postby leek on Sat Dec 17, 2005 2:59 am

Geoff wrote:It's currently sitting at around 29 degrees in Sydney


Believe it or not, it's 29 degrees here in the evenings as well :lol: :lol:

Fahrenheit of course :lol:

Thanks for the comments everyone...
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Dec 17, 2005 11:26 am

These are lovely, I'd say #3 is the weakest just as Stubbsy suggested it's missing something.. but I still like it as it reminds me of a gingerbread house.
#1 and #2 are great with the lovely lines and shapes.. very nicely composed.
The the final one.. just love it and it seems very 'english' to me.. (haven't been so judging from BBC tv..)
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Postby mudder on Sat Dec 17, 2005 1:31 pm

G'day,
Great series of images, the airport image is fascinating and the shot from the open topped bus really unusual and grabs the viewer.

Craig's right about the Gingerbread house, that's the first thing that came to my mind too :lol:

Love the last one, the B&W treatment suits it well...
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Postby Oneputt on Sat Dec 17, 2005 3:11 pm

Nice ones John and well presented as well. Enjoy your stay :D
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Postby thaddeus on Sat Dec 17, 2005 7:50 pm

I love the bus shot, Leek! Excellent!
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