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Postby owen on Mon May 08, 2006 8:17 pm

Here's an image I just took with my freshly repaired

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For some reason it is appearing differently after uploading despite changing it to the srgb colourspace... this has more contrast that I would like.
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Postby nito on Mon May 08, 2006 8:24 pm

I see banding on the bottom left hand corner. :wink:
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Postby big pix on Mon May 08, 2006 8:27 pm

did they clean your sensor...... there are a lot of white spots in the sky....... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Mon May 08, 2006 8:29 pm

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That is supurb! How did you hold those dark tones? Any post processing?
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Postby birddog114 on Mon May 08, 2006 8:31 pm

Owen,
Good start after a long break!
I love the colour of the sky and those white "dust bunnies".
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Postby avkomp on Mon May 08, 2006 8:35 pm

this is a good shot.

like this a lot.

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Postby PiroStitch on Mon May 08, 2006 8:41 pm

Great shot owen and welcome back :)

Btw, take it back - they left a stamp on the sensor :P Also quality is too good for a D70 :P :P
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Postby stubbsy on Mon May 08, 2006 8:50 pm

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Awesome photo. The sabbatical worked wonders for you. This is up there amongst the best images from you so far (and there have been a fair few of those!). Keep 'em coming
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Postby Killakoala on Mon May 08, 2006 8:52 pm

Owen, that's very nice mate. One of the cows posed for you too. :)
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Postby owen on Mon May 08, 2006 8:59 pm

Thanks for the kind comments folk.

Tonight was the first time I had used the built-in noise reduction and I think it did a fairly good job.

This was a 30second exposure (I hope that cow is okay!) at f4 @ 17mm with the Tokina 12-24.

It is a blend of two images, however they were the same image just adjusted differently in raw shooter - one for the sky and one for the ground. I also adjusted the curves in the sky to make it a little darker but keep the stars bright.

Thanks for all the comments, especially bringing to my attention the dirty sensor! :D :lol:
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Postby mudder on Mon May 08, 2006 9:15 pm

Mate, I love it! Lovely color saturation and ambience and the bright stars really add to it, this is terrific...

Bit of what I assume is WA distortion, there's a bit of a lean with the verticals (was the camera pointed upwards?), but love the mood and feel to this... That'd look good printed :wink:

Great image mate... :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 09, 2006 12:46 am

Beaut stuff Owen well done, I'm sure your very glad to have your baby back and in good health.
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Postby LostDingo on Tue May 09, 2006 6:00 am

Great shot Owen, the exposure works great with your capture the stars really set off the serenity
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Postby Bodak on Tue May 09, 2006 7:14 am

Great image and as one other has mentioned, how did you get the cows to remain still for so long.
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Postby birddog114 on Tue May 09, 2006 7:16 am

Bodak wrote:Great image and as one other has mentioned, how did you get the cows to remain still for so long.
Good work.


The cows obeyed his order: "Freeze or you'll be shot" :lol: :lol:
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Postby owen on Tue May 09, 2006 9:19 am

Actually it was the Paul Hogan trick ;)

There's a bit of WA distortion because I was tilting the lens up... I wanted to get the stars in. The shed was actually on a lean already, but the silo wasn't :)
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Postby Glen on Tue May 09, 2006 9:45 am

Very nice Owen :D
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Postby owen on Thu May 11, 2006 9:38 pm

Thanks Glen. Hopefully I can get some more night shots... just need to find some gloves because it's pretty bloody freezing lately.
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