Here are a couple of images from the inside of a 'red rattler' just in case you forgot what they were like.


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Red Rattler GraveyardI was lucky enough to stumble upon the 'graveyard' of some of Sydneys older trains.
Here are a couple of images from the inside of a 'red rattler' just in case you forgot what they were like. ![]() ![]() What does that button do....??
Arrhhhhhhhh those were the days.
Just as a side comment do both of these have "noise" or was it an intentional type of effect you were after? And this is where I met the leprechaun - He told me to burn things
Great shots, though I think I'd like to see them both in B&W. The perspective in #1 and the use of framing in #2 are excellent
![]() Can I ask where you 'stumbled' upon these beasts, and how illegal it might have been (I would love to go and take some shots in there ![]() So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
Thanks guys,
Rooboy, I just saw a big open gate and walked through, so technically I guess it is legal. I dont know exactly where it is. I actually parked in Newtown and just wandered round the backstreets looking for interesting subjects. I will go back again soon and get the full adress for you. Hey Jethro, it sucked travelling on these trains in the summer, especially rush hour on business days, I occasionally got off before my stop because it was too hot and smelly inside. And Dug, never travelled on those trains. In this compound there is a very old carriage, a sleeper style, which contains a shower, kitchen and lots of beds. It was a bit eery walking though as there were traces of dero's living inside. I have some shots of the carriage to post soon. Cheers Marty What does that button do....??
Marty #2 leaves me cold compositionally, but #1 is superb.
Peter
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They used to have old red carriages that came out as far as Bathurst on Friday and Saturday nights. I vaguely remember them, but I think they stopped in the mid eighties. My brother in law used to catch them to Sydney and go out on the piss, then travel home (3 hours each way...)
I really like number 1 by the way, I like the adds on the wall, gives it an abandoned feeling. Great! 2x D700, 2x D2h, lenses, speedlights, studio, pelican cases, tripods, monopods, patridges, pear trees etc etc
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Sorry Marty. Meant the composition doesn't evoke a visceral response in me
![]() Interestingly if I cover up the RHS of the image like would happen with a crop so the image stops a little to the right of the rightmost window it's a really different vibe for me (makes it look a bit like the windows are eyes). And no I haven't ingested anything pharmaceutical ![]() Peter
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Thanks for the explanation Peter,
forgive me but I have no bloody idea what you are saying, but it sounds good to me... ![]() Are you sure you having taken any illegal substances. Seriously though Mate, I really appreciate your feedback, I am very impressed on the way you look at an image, and what you 'feel' from that image, far more than I ever do even with my own images. I tried the crop you suggested, and I totally agree, the two windows could be eyes. I am sure when I return I could compose the shot better, using the two windows as eyes and not including the stairway. Cheers again, your comments will be acted on next time I am there. Marty What does that button do....??
I really like the first one Marty another great location for shooting and the low angle really suits.
Hey Marty,
love that #1 shot, this angle really gives a bug's eye view of decay. #2 looks too busy for me by comparison, I find it hard to find a focus point despite it being framed by the window. Love the location though. Roger.
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