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BathtimeHigh key - I was playing ... well, we both were
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much? Rel Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships! -Ansel Adams
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Rel - delightful - however I think the 2nd one is much better. The first one doesn't do it for me at all sorry - too wishy washy (pardon the pun
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very very good.......... shows little, says a lot........ great pix's for framing
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rel ..... a ulta fine black boarder with help these images, but very fine......
Cheers ....bp....
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rel,
I think the 2nd is outstanding. the high key lighting works well for both, the first needs some eye contact which the second more than makes up for. Well done Steve check out my image gallery @
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These two shots are superb - high keylight photographs of this nature should be printed and framed. If I was to be picky at all I would clone out the taps - they add nothing to the beautiful child.
Chris
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I actually prefer the first. Crop - not clone - the taps out, and this is a winner.
g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
I prefer the 2nd one, but I agree with Gary, remove the taps and the first is stronger in my book. I guess we can be thankful it was pics of your hubby in the bath
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I like the first one too.
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Excellent work Rel. I love them both.
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Rel,
Love both of them. I think the 1st shot needs to see an outline ( of colour, just slightly ) of the childs back to remove it from the background. I'd leave the taps in. Cheers, Warwick
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![]() ![]() ![]() This bathroom (like a lot of bathrooms) is predominantly white, so the light from a flash just bounces around beautifully !! Daniel was having a ball in the bath, so was happy to have his aunty taking shots. These were taken with my old Tamron 28-300 3.5-6.3 at 28mm, with f7 (first) and f10 for the second, and 1/200 for both. I was using the SB600 with beer cup and cap, pointed at the ceiling and upped to +2 for a really white result. A little tweaking in PS, and that was it. Hope this made sense? Hugs again Rel Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships! -Ansel Adams
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love the second pic but maybe clone out the taps?
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First one with the taps cloned out
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now that is better...... image lifts off the page........just love this series, very fresh look.......
Cheers ....bp....
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