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Postby blacknstormy on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:01 pm

High key - I was playing ... well, we both were :)

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Postby Geoff on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:10 pm

Rel - delightful - however I think the 2nd one is much better. The first one doesn't do it for me at all sorry - too wishy washy (pardon the pun :) ) . I'd like to see some more contrast in the 2nd one too.
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Postby big pix on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:11 pm

very very good.......... shows little, says a lot........ great pix's for framing
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Postby phillipb on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:12 pm

Works for me Rel.
I like the bubbles in the first and the expression in the second, can you combine them? :)
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Postby big pix on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:14 pm

rel ..... a ulta fine black boarder with help these images, but very fine......
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Postby avkomp on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:21 pm

rel,

I think the 2nd is outstanding.

the high key lighting works well for both,

the first needs some eye contact which the second more than makes up for.

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Postby Bob G on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:25 pm

Likewise for me - Love #2 Rel

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Postby macka on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:28 pm

#2 is great. Would look nice in a dark frame.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jun 26, 2006 12:13 am

These two shots are superb - high keylight photographs of this nature should be printed and framed. If I was to be picky at all I would clone out the taps - they add nothing to the beautiful child.
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jun 26, 2006 12:18 am

love the overexposed look
very sophisticated image making Rel!
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Postby gstark on Mon Jun 26, 2006 12:33 am

I actually prefer the first. Crop - not clone - the taps out, and this is a winner.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:47 am

I prefer the 2nd one, but I agree with Gary, remove the taps and the first is stronger in my book. I guess we can be thankful it was pics of your hubby in the bath :P you haven't convinced him to do any more "photography in the nude" after the last outing ?
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Postby Grev on Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:49 am

I like the first one too. :)

It reminds me of one of my cousin (when he was younger) drinking bath tub water. :lol:
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Postby Oneputt on Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:41 am

Excellent work Rel. I love them both. :D
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Postby birddog114 on Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:11 am

Rel,
Very nice!
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Postby LostDingo on Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:18 am

Rel that second one is fantastic...I am going against the trend and say i like with the taps! :oops:

A silly question on my part but how are these "high key" photos accomplished?
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Postby dreams on Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:07 am

very nice, i like the 2nd one
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Postby huynhie on Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:09 am

Very interesting shot's Rel.

For some reason I prefer the first photo the best. :wink:
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Postby Wocka on Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:32 am

Rel,

Love both of them.
I think the 1st shot needs to see an outline ( of colour, just slightly ) of the childs back to remove it from the background. I'd leave the taps in.

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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Jun 26, 2006 5:29 pm

:shock: Wow - honestly didn't expect this much feedback :) But thank you so much for all of your comments (and I bet you are all really glad it wasn't Damo and his hairy ass again ;) )

This bathroom (like a lot of bathrooms) is predominantly white, so the light from a flash just bounces around beautifully !! Daniel was having a ball in the bath, so was happy to have his aunty taking shots. These were taken with my old Tamron 28-300 3.5-6.3 at 28mm, with f7 (first) and f10 for the second, and 1/200 for both. I was using the SB600 with beer cup and cap, pointed at the ceiling and upped to +2 for a really white result. A little tweaking in PS, and that was it.

Hope this made sense?

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Postby owen on Mon Jun 26, 2006 5:33 pm

Beautiful shots Rel :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:19 pm

love the second pic but maybe clone out the taps?
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:01 pm

First one with the taps cloned out :)

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Postby big pix on Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:06 pm

now that is better...... image lifts off the page........just love this series, very fresh look.......
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