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First fashion shoot!

Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 12:20 pm

Hey guys..

Thought I might show a couple of shots from my first fashion shoot that took place a couple of weeks ago. I've been waiting for them to be published so I can post them here...

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Please feel free to comment/critique. All feedback will be taken on board as I have another similar shoot lined up for next Thursday!

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Postby wendellt on Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:57 pm

hard to critique if we don't know the brief

for example if the brief was to shoot fashion editorial for a funky brand
or is this just like a test shoot scenario

technically, it's full length lighting is evenly distributed which is good, setup on the 2nd is good and you presented the fashion well

but for your first fashion shoot i would say your well on your way
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Postby Glen on Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:59 pm

Liam, what items were you shooting? The images came out well
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Jul 21, 2006 2:10 pm

Liam - for catalogue work these photos work - they show the product and are nice and clean.
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:41 pm

Sorry, I'll give you a little more info!

The job was for a shopping centre catalogue to showcase a whole bunch of the clothing brands offered in the centre. The brief was to make it look "fun"! Although these are two of the less "fun" looking shots!

Cheers for the comments so far!

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Postby Glen on Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:48 pm

Liam, nice images, maybe a few props would show more of the fun, say some thick rope for a tug-o-war, etc
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:52 pm

Fair point! The art director wasn't keen on props but her boss wanted to use all of the studio lights to make it look like a movie set....unfortunately it was a last minute job and the designers didn't know how they were going to layout the catalogue so wanted the photo's as simple as poss!

Would have certainly added an extra element of interest, that's for sure!
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Postby Glen on Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:55 pm

Best to wrk to instructions. maybe a tug-o-war with a pair of jeans, makes them look even more desirable? Chuck an image in like that, they may make room for the image and let you direct next time
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:59 pm

I like your thinking Glen. The shoot I'm doing next thursday is unfortunately going to be even more structured as the images will be used as life-size cutouts and must match front to back! That's gonna be a challenge!
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Postby wendellt on Fri Jul 21, 2006 4:17 pm

ah
so you had to conform to your art director
so technically you did well but i think to make these more fun they need more attitude some role palying and your there
you can furhter mix things up by shooting on location where the models can work with the environment like in a cafe or something.
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 4:23 pm

Cheers Wendell..

We're going to do a summer version later this year so hopefully I'll be able to squeeze a little more fun of the models then!
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Postby Finch on Fri Jul 21, 2006 4:51 pm

Liam,

For your first fashion shoot, these work really well. As has been said, nice even lighting and crisp, clear shots.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

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Postby ozimax on Fri Jul 21, 2006 5:13 pm

Definitely sharp, crisp and clean, excellent work. What sort of background were you using?

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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:02 pm

This one.

Although it's a little bit different now, the end with the two hazy's is completely curved in all directions for smooth car shots and the photo board is now behind a partition and custom built wine set. This VR is a few years old.

Cheers Finch and Ozimax.
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Postby leek on Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:36 pm

Hi Liam,
Not sure why, but I'm not seeing your images... just get a little red cross...
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:40 pm

Really? You mean the two at the start of this thread or the Quicktime VR that i linked to?

Reason I ask is cos I setup some anti-hotlinking stuff on my site today but if anything you should be seeing a "You do not have permission to use this image..." picture (thanks for the heads up in an earlier thread Moz!).
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Postby leek on Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:53 pm

I'm not seeing the two original images... I tried linking directly to the URL displayed in the image Properties as well without any luck...

When I click on the Quicktime link, I get "error on page" at the bottom left and nothing happens...
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Postby beetleboy on Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:59 pm

Very odd..

Is anyone else having problems?
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Postby Marvin on Sat Jul 22, 2006 12:41 am

Nope - I saw them fine.
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Postby 99 on Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:28 am

I can see them too :?:
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Postby leek on Sat Jul 22, 2006 7:52 am

Hmmm... must be me then... Strange, coz I'm seeing all other people's photos...
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Postby Pa on Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:21 am

i cant see them as well beetleboy. cheers pa
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Postby beetleboy on Sat Jul 22, 2006 3:29 pm

hmm..two people now! Bugger!

Any suggestions?!!
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Postby leek on Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:14 pm

Curiouser and curiouser said Alice...

Very strange, but I can now see your images...
They look very good Liam...
I like the look of your studio as well... I managed to get the .MOV file working after a refresh - It could be the beta version of IE7 that I'm running :wink:

Is that your studio, or did you hire it?
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Postby robster on Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:43 pm

beetleboy wrote:This one.

Although it's a little bit different now, the end with the two hazy's is completely curved in all directions for smooth car shots and the photo board is now behind a partition and custom built wine set. This VR is a few years old.

Cheers Finch and Ozimax.


That is the most wicked studio! :) Nicely organised, I can also imagine your light just balls in that corner. I'd love to have a play in there :) BTW, are those big soft boxes hotlights? Or you just flashed em all for that image?


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Postby wendellt on Sat Jul 22, 2006 10:26 pm

beetleboy wrote:This one.

Although it's a little bit different now, the end with the two hazy's is completely curved in all directions for smooth car shots and the photo board is now behind a partition and custom built wine set. This VR is a few years old.

Cheers Finch and Ozimax.


holy molly

thats one kick ass studio
the equipment looks better than the outfit at pioneer studios

do you own all of that?
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Postby christiand on Sat Jul 22, 2006 10:33 pm

Hi Liam,

I love the studio :D 8) :lol:; drool ... 8)
In some way it looks like a giant light tent to me; with the
capabiliy of positioning lights inside.
Just lovely and the shots come out very nice.

Thanks for sharing,
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Postby beetleboy on Sun Jul 23, 2006 2:31 am

Leek..I think it must have been my anti-hotlinking that did it - I turned it off not long before you posted that you could now see the images so I'll have to revise how it works. Thanks for pointing it out!

Cheers for the compliments everyone, I'll try to answer your questions!

Leek - no it's not my studio (I wish!!). I am a freelancer based at the studio (in Norwood for anyone from Adelaide!) and have an agreement with the owners/my mentors.

robster - It's not always quite so organised! Often we have 2 or 3 things going on at once so it's a lot messier! Plus there's now a semi-permanent wine set as well. The back corners are beautiful to shoot in - especially now that the cyc wraps in all directions (as mentioned earlier the QTVR is a bit old). The big softboxes are called 'hazylights'. They are strobes and rock the kazbah! Keeping them colour balanced can be difficult tho!

wendell - I've never seen pioneer so can't compare! Their site doesn't seem to work either! And no, I don't own any of it! The two guys that own the studio/building/business have been partners for over 30 years and in this studio for over 20 - they're pretty well established and very well known and respected in Adelaide (lucky me!!!).

christian - cheers! It is a fabulous place to play. It blew my mind when we landed the latest Mitsubishi 380 (series 2) and Colt jobs and I spent a couple of weeks assisting one of the owners (one of Aus' top car photog's) and we had the cars in the studio lit up like a dream. The cars were shot on a Mamiya 645 with a Phase One P25. LOTS OF FUN!!!

I think that covers everyone - sorry about the long post!

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