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by Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:48 pm
Gidday,
This is my first B&W conversion of my daughter (now 3 weeks old).
Please give CC as I'd like to have this image, or one similar enlarged for the wall.
Are the highlights too harsh?
Thank you to Rel (BlacknStormy) for some very nice macro shots that are on the wall in the nursery.
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by Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 07, 2006 2:51 pm
She's gorgeous Wocka, and Jane offers some very good advice. I'd also suggest improving the lighting, natural window light would probably be best, even difused through a white curtain. BTW Jane - Gorgeous photos of your little ones too!
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by Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:02 pm
Jane - thank you for the comments. I will seek out some more of my shots ( only 1000+ at the moment ) to find something suitable for the eyes.
I borrowed a friends 100mm macro for feet etc. They have come out nice, but maybe a little too much detail for a baby, eg too sharp. I might need to blur them a little to soften them up.
Craig - this image was with a natural window light ( just to her right ) and through net curtains. But maybe it has cast a little too much shadow. I might try some fill in flash next time ( I only have the onboard flash on the camera, but I have the power turned right down do it's not too stong ).
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by Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:05 pm
Warwick the other soultion for a bit more even lighting is to get a piece of white cardboard or a relefector (the car sun visors work well in a pinch) and use that to light the shadows up. (But sounds like you doing everything right  )
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by Glen on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:06 pm
Warwick, very nice image  I agree with Jane's suggestion it could have even more impact
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by blacknstormy on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:56 pm
Congratulations Wocka & Mrs Wocka - she's beautiful !!!
I like the shot- but agree with the suggestions of stormygirl  I would also like to see some shots done on a paler background - gives a really nice high key effect, which seems to emphasize the little ones eyes even more
But on that note - more please
Hugs always
Rel
ps glad the macros made it to the wall 
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by TonyH on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:02 pm
one word..... gorgeous!
All I know, is that I don't know enough.....
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by Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:12 pm
Thanks Rel,
I was going to try and take some posed images of her on a white sheet (background) to try some highkey images like you posted.
But she's not co-operating at the moment, every time I place her on the floor she starts to wriggle and move.
Maybe I need to fool her and just do it in her cot. We haven't had much time without nappes yet. So I don't know how many images I'll be able to take before we have an added bonus.
Cheers
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by Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:53 pm
Is this better?
Unfortunately her mouth is OOF, or maybe she just moved. Not too sure.

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