B&W Baby Portrait

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B&W Baby Portrait

Postby Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:48 pm

Gidday,

This is my first B&W conversion of my daughter (now 3 weeks old).
Please give CC as I'd like to have this image, or one similar enlarged for the wall.

Are the highlights too harsh?

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Thank you to Rel (BlacknStormy) for some very nice macro shots that are on the wall in the nursery.
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Postby stormygirl on Mon Aug 07, 2006 2:41 pm

Hi Wocka,

She is gorgeous! I'm far from an expert, but my advice is to get in a little closer and try and focus on her eyes, and possibly without the hat. I have taken many BW ones of my cherubs, and have this one up on the wall:

http://www.stormygirl.net/images/jessica2bandw.jpg

....although she was about four months there!

You could also try and focus on the little things like hands and feet...

http://www.stormygirl.net/images/ben1bandw.jpg

Experiment, and take as many as you can as they grow up way too quickly!

There are several more here: http://www.stormygirl.net/blackandwhite.htm
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 07, 2006 2:51 pm

She's gorgeous Wocka, and Jane offers some very good advice. I'd also suggest improving the lighting, natural window light would probably be best, even difused through a white curtain. BTW Jane - Gorgeous photos of your little ones too!
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Postby Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:02 pm

Jane - thank you for the comments. I will seek out some more of my shots ( only 1000+ at the moment ) to find something suitable for the eyes.

I borrowed a friends 100mm macro for feet etc. They have come out nice, but maybe a little too much detail for a baby, eg too sharp. I might need to blur them a little to soften them up.

Craig - this image was with a natural window light ( just to her right ) and through net curtains. But maybe it has cast a little too much shadow. I might try some fill in flash next time ( I only have the onboard flash on the camera, but I have the power turned right down do it's not too stong ).
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:05 pm

Warwick the other soultion for a bit more even lighting is to get a piece of white cardboard or a relefector (the car sun visors work well in a pinch) and use that to light the shadows up. (But sounds like you doing everything right ;-))
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Postby Glen on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:06 pm

Warwick, very nice image :D I agree with Jane's suggestion it could have even more impact
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:56 pm

Congratulations Wocka & Mrs Wocka - she's beautiful !!!
I like the shot- but agree with the suggestions of stormygirl :) I would also like to see some shots done on a paler background - gives a really nice high key effect, which seems to emphasize the little ones eyes even more :)

But on that note - more please :)

Hugs always
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ps glad the macros made it to the wall :) :)
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Postby TonyH on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:02 pm

one word..... gorgeous!
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Postby Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:12 pm

Thanks Rel,

I was going to try and take some posed images of her on a white sheet (background) to try some highkey images like you posted.

But she's not co-operating at the moment, every time I place her on the floor she starts to wriggle and move.

Maybe I need to fool her and just do it in her cot. We haven't had much time without nappes yet. So I don't know how many images I'll be able to take before we have an added bonus.

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Postby Wocka on Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:53 pm

Is this better?
Unfortunately her mouth is OOF, or maybe she just moved. Not too sure.

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