I am not sure how i went, i amde plenty of mistakes but with practice comes perfect! Any advice or critique offered would be taken on board!
Cheers
Dan
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My First Model Shoot!
Hey all,
I am not sure how i went, i amde plenty of mistakes but with practice comes perfect! Any advice or critique offered would be taken on board!
Cheers Dan
hi
very deviantart material, i really like the last one. christian check my website>> http://www.6701.sunpixs.com
well done! great shots...very creative esp the last two photos.
my fav one would be #3  D70s/D200; Tokina 16-50mm 2.8; 18-70DX ; 50mm 1.8 ; 80-200mm 2.8D ; SB600 + Stofen Omini Bouncer
Dan very dramatic, like them all. I would suggest that on 5 you move a lityle further from the wall to reduce the shadow on the wall.
ps We have a 4 images per post rule in the FAQ, could you keep that in mind next post? Thanks
They are good
The first one has too much light for my liking (I am being very subjective) and I prefer the black and white photos. Specially the one with the hands interlocked it is more than sadness... more like dispair, or loss. They are very moody.
i like the 1st one because you exposed for the backlit model therefore blowing out the background a trick often used by many photographers
it looks very nostalgic but i think the expression counters the effect and thats probably why it's not liked so much, this would of worked better if the expression was gentler sombre expressions are good it's a challenging series really gets you thinking compared to the the obvious glamour shot in terms of strling love the 2nd one and fill flash harbour shot
Your techniques are sound and your creativity comes through. Your model has too much eye makeup and it detracts from the rest of her face.
Regards
Matt. K
I like the 2nd pic a lot. If you can, burn the edges and the left a bit to create a bit more contrast and make the overall mood a bit darker.
Keep up the good work. Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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Love the lighting in the harbour bridge shot. Details on the shot? 
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