My time in Sydney :)

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My time in Sydney :)

Postby Ronza on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:33 pm

Spent last week in Sydney, even met up for the Sydney Meet on Friday night (the asian guy in the front Row in Yips thread). Very valuable experience shooting in a foreign city seeing things behind a lens all the time, spent most days out early and heading back after sunset trudging around the CBD, Newtown, Bondi Junction and around the train stations. Took home ~1106 photos, just had the chance to process about 80ish shots from the first 3 days so far.

Definitely a big focus on street stuff while I was there, hopefully will have the chance to put together some Panos later when I have time this weekend. Cutting down an entire week into a 6 photo post pains me but nevertheless; some images :)

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#1 - EOS20D & 24-105/4L at 24mm ISO200 f/5.6 1/60s

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#2 - The Usual Suspects - EOS20D & 35/2 ISO800 f/11 1/8s


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#3 - A Tangle - EOS20D & 24-105/4L at 24mm ISO400 f/8 1/125s

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#4 - Candid Expressions - EOS20D & 24-105/4L at 45mm ISO800 f/4 1/40s

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#5 - EOS20D & 10-20 at 14mm ISO800 f/8 1/125s

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#6 - Go Go Don't Go - EOS20D & 24-10/4L at 55mm ISO100 f/11 1.3s

C&C welcome, really love going to Sydney :) Kudos if the locals can identify the locations, Id love to know where #3 actually was...
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Postby owen on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:44 pm

That second photo is absolutely perfect to me. so many different personalities and contrasting people all at the same place, you've captured it perfectly.
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Postby spaz on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:47 pm

Nice shots, especially 2-5. What processing do you do to get colours like in 2 & 3? It's very similar to the "One Way" one that you submitted to my site as well as a lot of the other urban colour collection.
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Postby rflower on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:19 pm

I thought number 2 was cool. Could just about imagine the wind whooshing through the tunnels before the train. It really captures the moment.

And I think shot 6 is awesome. I love the colours of the sunset (it is sunset right :) ...), the hustle and bustle of city life rushing past..

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Postby drifter on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:28 pm

Wow . Theses are great shots .The second one is my favorite .

The third one is the only one that doesn't work IMO .
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Postby moz on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:39 pm

I'm impressed, especially the last one. The colours there are nice, and the big ugly traffic light works surprisingly well.
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:47 pm

awesome stuff there :) i'm surprised that dude with the apple didn't object to you taking his pic.
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Postby padey on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:51 pm

I love them in the series that you've presented them in.

Any night shots?
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Postby admajic on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:59 pm

Great shots. You show Sydney differently. Well done :)
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:26 pm

Are those the places where I travel every day?? :shock:


Truly amazing work there Ronza :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:08 pm

Ronza it was a pleasure meeting you, but even better seeing these results, awesome stuff. Did anyone have issues with their photos being taken ? #2 and #4 are awesome.
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Postby admajic on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:09 pm

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Postby Mitchell on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:34 pm

#2-3 and 5-6 for me. Very nice series. Great use of dark/light contrast and some longer shutter speeds.

The first seems a bit too yellow for me, and I'm distracted in the 4th by Apple Man's expression - you were sprung...!
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Postby Alex on Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:31 pm

Love the series and the treatment you gave them. No. 2 is the standout for me.

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Postby adam on Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:12 am

They are very good! I especially like the 2nd and the last one! ah! So nice!
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Postby asaroha on Sat Oct 14, 2006 3:04 am

I love them all, but especially no 1-4. They just scream RONZA to me.
For some reason in my head your name is associated with that shot with a blurry woman walking under an arrow sign in it and these shots reminds me alot of that photo, probably because of the signature PP style.
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Postby shutterbug on Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:45 am

You are good :wink: I love them all
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Postby Jeko70 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:59 am

For me #1-#2-#4,
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Postby ozczecho on Sun Oct 15, 2006 1:02 am

Mate congrats...looks like your camera survived Sydney :D :D

Awesome series...love them all..all unique in their special way...but #2 stands out...what a great scene, captured so masterfully...
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Postby Ronza on Sun Oct 15, 2006 3:46 pm

spaz wrote:Nice shots, especially 2-5. What processing do you do to get colours like in 2 & 3? It's very similar to the "One Way" one that you submitted to my site as well as a lot of the other urban colour collection.


Heck of a lot of contrast in the RAW conversion and often some slight desaturation. Alot of the times, the colours are an attempt to replicate film types and move slightly away from the cleanliness of digitial files.

padey wrote:I love them in the series that you've presented them in.

Any night shots?


Got a few panos I've still got to stitch from the night meet but there was one nice shot of Town Hall I did like
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Appreciate the comments all round, can't wait to get some more time behind the camera again and will definitely have to return to Sydney next holidays.
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Postby blacknstormy on Sun Oct 15, 2006 4:05 pm

Ronza - what fantastic shots !!! Nice to see shots of Sydney that aren't your 'typical shots of Sydney' if you know what I mean :? :)
Well done !!!
Looking forward to seeing more of your shots !!
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Oct 15, 2006 7:05 pm

Sydney through your eyes looks different! Nice work!
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Postby jammy2 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:02 pm

Cool urban captures, there are all very good and demonstrate a good eye for the unexpected but if I had to choose, number 4 would be the one for the contrast in expression between the two occupants in the seat, "one caught mid-laughter in conversation and the other mid-chew with a puzzled gotacha look =)
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Postby Onyx on Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:56 pm

Ronza - hmm, took me awhile to realise that you're the same Ronza as on OCAU, who organised those terrorist photographer t-shirts, one of which I have. ;)

Hope you enjoyed your visit to Sydney. Your train station shots in/around Central are inspiring. I guess it's that daring spirit for street candids that I admire about them - lacking the guts to shoot them myself.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:44 pm

Outstanding images of which the first 2 are far and away the best for me.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Oct 16, 2006 10:02 pm

Great 'Grunge' shots Ronza. My pick is #2 great feel. Love the static figures counterbalanced with the moving train. Lovely. I'd be tempted to clone out distracting crumpled rubbish at the feet of Mr Cuba. :)
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Postby seeto.centric on Thu Dec 07, 2006 6:29 pm

nice work there Ronza!
i know where all the places are in the shots except for 3 and 5... *scratches head*

sydney does indeed look alot better from your perspective!
the exaggerated green tinge in the first shot creates a nice mood :)

haha oh and about that apple eater and the cuba man and the others in that shot.. did you talk to them before or just snapped them? tough skinned man you are! :P

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Postby mic on Thu Dec 07, 2006 9:24 pm

These are really great shots.

Well done !

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Postby Glen on Fri Dec 08, 2006 12:22 am

Ronza, you really got a different look to many things here, great.
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