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by Ronza on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:33 pm
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by owen on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:44 pm
That second photo is absolutely perfect to me. so many different personalities and contrasting people all at the same place, you've captured it perfectly.
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by spaz on Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:47 pm
Nice shots, especially 2-5. What processing do you do to get colours like in 2 & 3? It's very similar to the "One Way" one that you submitted to my site as well as a lot of the other urban colour collection.
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by rflower on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:19 pm
I thought number 2 was cool. Could just about imagine the wind whooshing through the tunnels before the train. It really captures the moment.
And I think shot 6 is awesome. I love the colours of the sunset (it is sunset right  ...), the hustle and bustle of city life rushing past..
Well done.
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by drifter on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:28 pm
Wow . Theses are great shots .The second one is my favorite .
The third one is the only one that doesn't work IMO .
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by moz on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:39 pm
I'm impressed, especially the last one. The colours there are nice, and the big ugly traffic light works surprisingly well.
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by PiroStitch on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:47 pm
awesome stuff there  i'm surprised that dude with the apple didn't object to you taking his pic.
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by padey on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:51 pm
I love them in the series that you've presented them in.
Any night shots?
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by admajic on Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:59 pm
Great shots. You show Sydney differently. Well done 
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by Yi-P on Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:26 pm
Are those the places where I travel every day??
Truly amazing work there Ronza 
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by Alpha_7 on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:08 pm
Ronza it was a pleasure meeting you, but even better seeing these results, awesome stuff. Did anyone have issues with their photos being taken ? #2 and #4 are awesome.
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by admajic on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:09 pm
.miss posted.
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by Mitchell on Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:34 pm
#2-3 and 5-6 for me. Very nice series. Great use of dark/light contrast and some longer shutter speeds.
The first seems a bit too yellow for me, and I'm distracted in the 4th by Apple Man's expression - you were sprung...!
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by Alex on Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:31 pm
Love the series and the treatment you gave them. No. 2 is the standout for me.
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by adam on Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:12 am
They are very good! I especially like the 2nd and the last one! ah! So nice!
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by asaroha on Sat Oct 14, 2006 3:04 am
I love them all, but especially no 1-4. They just scream RONZA to me.
For some reason in my head your name is associated with that shot with a blurry woman walking under an arrow sign in it and these shots reminds me alot of that photo, probably because of the signature PP style.
Keep up the good work.

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by shutterbug on Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:45 am
You are good  I love them all
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by Jeko70 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:59 am
For me #1-#2-#4,
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by ozczecho on Sun Oct 15, 2006 1:02 am
Mate congrats...looks like your camera survived Sydney
Awesome series...love them all..all unique in their special way...but #2 stands out...what a great scene, captured so masterfully...
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by Ronza on Sun Oct 15, 2006 3:46 pm
spaz wrote:Nice shots, especially 2-5. What processing do you do to get colours like in 2 & 3? It's very similar to the "One Way" one that you submitted to my site as well as a lot of the other urban colour collection.
Heck of a lot of contrast in the RAW conversion and often some slight desaturation. Alot of the times, the colours are an attempt to replicate film types and move slightly away from the cleanliness of digitial files. padey wrote:I love them in the series that you've presented them in.
Any night shots?
Got a few panos I've still got to stitch from the night meet but there was one nice shot of Town Hall I did like
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Appreciate the comments all round, can't wait to get some more time behind the camera again and will definitely have to return to Sydney next holidays.
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by blacknstormy on Sun Oct 15, 2006 4:05 pm
Ronza - what fantastic shots !!! Nice to see shots of Sydney that aren't your 'typical shots of Sydney' if you know what I mean
Well done !!!
Looking forward to seeing more of your shots !!
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by Matt. K on Sun Oct 15, 2006 7:05 pm
Sydney through your eyes looks different! Nice work!
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by jammy2 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:02 pm
Cool urban captures, there are all very good and demonstrate a good eye for the unexpected but if I had to choose, number 4 would be the one for the contrast in expression between the two occupants in the seat, "one caught mid-laughter in conversation and the other mid-chew with a puzzled gotacha look =)
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by Onyx on Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:56 pm
Ronza - hmm, took me awhile to realise that you're the same Ronza as on OCAU, who organised those terrorist photographer t-shirts, one of which I have.
Hope you enjoyed your visit to Sydney. Your train station shots in/around Central are inspiring. I guess it's that daring spirit for street candids that I admire about them - lacking the guts to shoot them myself.
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by stubbsy on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:44 pm
Outstanding images of which the first 2 are far and away the best for me.
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by marcotrov on Mon Oct 16, 2006 10:02 pm
Great 'Grunge' shots Ronza. My pick is #2 great feel. Love the static figures counterbalanced with the moving train. Lovely. I'd be tempted to clone out distracting crumpled rubbish at the feet of Mr Cuba.
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by seeto.centric on Thu Dec 07, 2006 6:29 pm
nice work there Ronza!
i know where all the places are in the shots except for 3 and 5... *scratches head*
sydney does indeed look alot better from your perspective!
the exaggerated green tinge in the first shot creates a nice mood
haha oh and about that apple eater and the cuba man and the others in that shot.. did you talk to them before or just snapped them? tough skinned man you are!
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by mic on Thu Dec 07, 2006 9:24 pm
These are really great shots.
Well done !
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by Glen on Fri Dec 08, 2006 12:22 am
Ronza, you really got a different look to many things here, great.
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