Kirribilli Sunrise

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Kirribilli Sunrise

Postby Manta on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:02 pm

I know it's SUCH a cliche but, hey, it was my first trip to Sydney in 25 years and I did get up at 5.00am for it. :D

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Postby Bindii on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:09 pm

Wow! Certainly worth getting up at 5am for I think...I might be tempted to crop it into a pano...but its great just as it is!! :)
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Postby macka on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:16 pm

Simon,

Bit of a crop off the top and bottom and this will come up a treat. :D Nice work.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:25 pm

Excellent Simon and a great keepsake. DOn't take 25 years before the next visit though
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Postby Manta on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:29 pm

Never argue with a lady (or two in this case!) Here's the pano version; it runs a bit deep in the foreground but I really wanted to retain those blue reflections:

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Postby Manta on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:30 pm

stubbsy wrote:Excellent Simon and a great keepsake. DOn't take 25 years before the next visit though


Thanks Peter - shame we didn't get a chance to catch up. :D
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Postby Bindii on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:32 pm

Very nice....:)

Now if you could just arrange some rowers in the left foreground and maybe a hot air balloon or two in the sky it would be cracking...*wink*
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Postby Mr Darcy on Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:57 pm

Now if you could just arrange some rowers in the left foreground and maybe a hot air balloon or two in the sky it would be cracking

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Then it would be Canberra, not Sydney
Here you need a container ship blotting out that eyesore on the left, and a few contrails :wink:



Oh and a coathanger or two lyuing about.

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Postby stetner on Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:44 pm

Hmm, I prefer the uncropped version, the streak of cloud adds something for me. Excellent shot (s)!
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Postby Geoff on Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:51 pm

Magic Simon!
You'd be crazy not to have this printed!!
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Postby Onyx on Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:32 am

Wow Simon, that is postcard perfect. I've never seen Sydney so beautiful before!
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Postby colin_12 on Thu Jan 11, 2007 8:14 am

I like the colours Simon.
The reflections are great. Every time I want to do reflection shots theres a duck or boat etc. But that is life and patience pays off in the end.
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 11, 2007 8:23 am

Hi Simon,
I'd be interested to know how much (and what if possible) post processing you've done to this image? Mind sharing? :D
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:08 am

As the city sleeps Mr Manta slyly slips out into the pre-dawn quiteness to take one of the best pics I have seen in a long time of this city.

I much prefer the uncropped version :wink:
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Postby radar on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:15 am

Great photo Simon,

your printer certainly comes in handy for this one :D :D beautiful capture.

I also find the cropped version just a bit too tight, I probably would have liked a bit more of the sky.

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Postby gstark on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:20 am

Simon,

I too think this is a great image, and that it looks great in a pano crop ... but leave the sky uncropped, and crop from the bottom instead.

Try it and tell us what you think. :)

And it was great to meet you and your lovely family. I'm probably a bit disappointed that we didn't get too much time to chat one on one, but c'est la vie.
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Postby Manta on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:49 am

gstark wrote:I'm probably a bit disappointed that we didn't get too much time to chat one on one, but c'est la vie.


Me too Gary - I was under the impression the disparate groups would all get together again as the night wore on but before that occurred the mini-Mantas were flagging significantly and we still had the walk across the bridge to deal with. Just a good excuse for me to come back down again I guess!

Thanks all for the comments on the shot. I'll try out the suggestions. There's more to come too, I'm afraid!

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Postby Glen on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:52 am

Simon, brilliant shot. It is a view I never tire of and you hyave captured it beautifully
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Postby Oscar on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:59 am

Stunning shot Simon! Lovely capture.

I'm afaid I don't like getting up that early these days!

I'll sit on the fence here as I like both the original and the cropped version. In the cropped version I would have liked a little more sky (or maybe less foreground).

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby Manta on Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:31 am

Okay - here's another crop, with nothing taken off the sky. Better?

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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:39 am

Simon - PERFECT!
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Postby Oscar on Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:39 am

Print them all!!! I'm sure you could sell any you don't keep.

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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:55 am

Simon - that final rework is the one - it needed the sky too. And I was disappointed I didn't get to meet you, but a Sunday night in Sydney followed by a drive back to Newcastle for work the next day is too much for my tired old(ish) body :wink:
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Postby radar on Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:59 am

Manta wrote:Okay - here's another crop, with nothing taken off the sky. Better?


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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:05 am

Bloody beautiful :) ;)
Final crop is picture perfect - you big show off :) :) :) lol

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Postby Manta on Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:11 am

Thank you everyone for the kind words.

I can move on from this shot now - one down and 397 to go....

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Postby kamran on Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:37 pm

Wow! Great shot. Rich colors. Top capture ! Keep it up.

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Postby Manta on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:42 pm

kamran wrote:Keep it up.


I think I might just do that Kamran - thanks!

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Postby ozimax on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:48 pm

Excellent photo Simon, worth the early wake up call, so we can all enjoy the image... :)
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Postby Manta on Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:54 pm

Thx Max - Coffs was pretty nice the short time we were there too. I went to give you a call but had lost your number!!
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