Hyde Park Fountain

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Hyde Park Fountain

Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:55 pm

I've seen these that many times i don't know what i think anymore. Could i get some fresh eyes to add their thoughts :? Cheers:

The lights were hard to handle..

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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:03 pm

They say that first impressions are the best - I looked and I liked :)
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:47 pm

#1 and #2 in that order are excellent - well composed and exposed and a great take on a very hard to photograph subject. #3 on the other hand is a little too tightly cropped with no strong central focus. I guess 2 out of 3 ain't bad.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:49 pm

A nice take on a familiar subject. I like!
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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:54 pm

Cheers guys, good to hear :) I know what you mean about 3 also, it's at the bottom of my list too.
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Postby christiand on Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:58 pm

I like these photos.

The colours, the exposure and soft water are beautiful.
The statue and the gloss are great.
I also agree that #3 is cropped a bit to tightly.
I would have included the complete arch of water that emanates from the fish on the left hand side.
Another thought: apply lens correction under filters in photoshop to change vertical perspective - straighten the sculpture so that it doesn't lean backwards.
(do this AFTER increasing canvas size in Image menu.)

Thanks for sharing,
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Postby W00DY on Tue Jun 05, 2007 9:16 pm

Hi James,

I know it can be hard shooting in public places but the only thing that ruins #3 for me is the family in the background and the garbage bin in the middle of the fountain, I just seem to focus on them instead of the fountain.

Number 1 and 2 are great though.

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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 05, 2007 10:22 pm

Appreciate the feedback :) Think i'll shelf #3, and work on some others i got. The guys in the BG are pretty distracting now that you mention it.

Cheers christiand, i'm not master in PS but i'll have a fiddle :)

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