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B&W implied nude C&C

Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:47 pm

Was asked to do this shot yesterday. Was a great challenge, learned a lot doing it, and interested to see what the good folk in here think of it.

this was a paper seamless taped to the edge of my kitchen bench, with a black cloth backdrop behind the shot. Lighting set up, is one strip light parallel to the models body, above her. I love the shadows, these shadows are straight from the camera! :D

the hard line black to white in the background is undesirable, but I like the curves too. Perhaps I can PP somehting better in this area of the shot.

C&C most appreciated, thanks, and have a wonderful day! :D

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Postby wendellt on Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:52 pm

this is one of your best images love the shapes and simple lighting

somehow when you overthink the image gets boring

i like this one the best
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Postby owen on Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:56 pm

Like wendell I really like this image. It's a different pose - something I'm not used to seeing, yet it's done perfectly in my opinion.

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:57 pm

thanks wendell,
I think this shot was one of the first where I have stepped into a bit of creativity, creating what I want to see, not what I think others want... a much nicer way to be creative :D
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:00 pm

owen wrote:Like wendell I really like this image. It's a different pose - something I'm not used to seeing, yet it's done perfectly in my opinion.

awesome work.


thanks owen, I am very happy with the result too :D
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Postby Louie on Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:02 pm

I like this one, the lines and shadows are great. The black and white are well-balanced, kind of 'yin and yang' -ish.

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Postby Alex on Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:13 pm

Well done, Bruce. Certainly the best image I've seen you posted thus far. Beautiful lines and nice lighting!

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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:43 pm

Great photo - I like the complementary lines and the lighting. Awesome work.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:11 am

My favourite shot out of your recently posted model photos, I think this idea has a heap of potential.
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Postby devilla101 on Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:51 pm

Great shot here.

I love the subject and simple prop use.

Good black and white conversion and the shadows are great and subtle. I don't even mind the one being casted.

Good job
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Postby ATJ on Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:13 pm

Bruce, I think this is techincally well executed in all aspects - lighting, tone, etc. as the other have pointed out.

The only problem I have is I don't get it. Is it trying to say something? Or is it just "art" (and maybe that's why I don't get it)? It looks like a very uncomfortable pose. Oh, and I don't like the chunky shoes, but that is probably just me.
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:56 pm

Bruce, this is probably one of your best, if not the best pics! You certainly have a creative mind mate ;)
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Postby BT*ist on Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:56 pm

A Truly Beautiful Shot!

I hereby label it "Art" :D :D
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Postby casnell on Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:38 pm

Fabulous shot, easily my favourite of the year!
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Postby iposiniditos on Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:52 pm

The best shot i've seen from you too :)

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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:58 pm

A lovely shot. My only critique would be to try and have the body form match the white/black form to give a more graphic flow to the image.
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:05 pm

PiroStitch wrote:Bruce, this is probably one of your best, if not the best pics! You certainly have a creative mind mate ;)


thanks wayne. I have wanted to push myself for some time. I have been holding off being creative while learning the ropes of the gear that I have, and all things new to my skills due to digital, and my love of people and portraiture.

thanks to you, and many other in this very forum, I get challenged, and encouraged to learn more and more, so thanks all!

everytime I get my meter out I think of leigh's comments on exposure. everytime I pose a subject, I try to remember the solid advise from Wendell. and your comments, on me stepping out of a comfort zone, into a fun filled adventure of creative photography.

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:08 pm

sirhc55 wrote:A lovely shot. My only critique would be to try and have the body form match the white/black form to give a more graphic flow to the image.


that's planned for when I install a tarzan rope in my studio space, :lol:
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:16 pm

ATJ wrote:Bruce, I think this is techincally well executed in all aspects - lighting, tone, etc. as the other have pointed out.

The only problem I have is I don't get it. Is it trying to say something? Or is it just "art" (and maybe that's why I don't get it)? It looks like a very uncomfortable pose. Oh, and I don't like the chunky shoes, but that is probably just me.


Hi ATJ

agree on the shoes, they are a bit strong/heavy for the shapes, strappy heels next time...

as for what were we trying to say, umm, curves of light? dunno, no statement, just fun, enjoyable, tasteful curves.
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:41 pm

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A lovely, sensual image. A touch of Helmut Newton, but with a tad more sensitivity. (I never like Newtons work). Would love to see a print of this.
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Postby gooseberry on Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:51 am

Nice concept and good B&W - I like it. though my personal preference is that the white backdrop hasn't been layed down nicely (seems to have just been plonked down there, rather than carefully arranged). Also, the placement of the trailing ribbon can be better so as no to "cut" through the feet.
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:00 am

gooseberry wrote:Nice concept and good B&W - I like it. though my personal preference is that the white backdrop hasn't been layed down nicely (seems to have just been plonked down there, rather than carefully arranged). Also, the placement of the trailing ribbon can be better so as no to "cut" through the feet.


thanks for the feedback. I think next time I would tape the paper to the floor more. it was an issue slipping out from under her, as her weight was pushing away from the bench.

I think I might clone the black over the white where the two backdrops meet...
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